" The Freaks"

dancin_girl11 · 08-21-2009, 05:14 PM

Chapter 1
I woke up in a pitch dark cave and i couldn't move my hands or feet. I didn't know what to do, all I knew was I HAD to get out of there. All of a sudden i heard two screams.

" Wh-who's there?"

" I... a... i'm Jordan." said a voice.

" And i'm Dori. We are both 14." said the other voice.

" Is that it?" Then a really creepy voice said

" I'm Cory and this is my lil' bro Austin."

" I'm 9 and my brother is 14. What's going on i'm really scared."

" It's ok we are all going to be all right." then i used my telekinesis to get my knife out of my pocket and into my hand. I cut the ropes on everybody, got my flashlight and we walked down the cave. Then i heard footsteps.

"Shhhh do u hear that?" i asked

" No." Cory said. Then in a blink of an eye we were surrounded by these frog looking things. We all knew we were up to a fight.

08-21-2009, 05:20 PM

Ha, Austin.
As in CountryWiiBoy13.
As in LOL.
Anyway, more reading material is always good. Just make sure you stick at it, there's nothing worse than someone writing a story and posting it in installments, then getting bored and trailing off.

*CountryWiiBoy13* · 08-21-2009, 05:26 PM

Originally Posted by Ruairi

Ha, Austin.
As in CountryWiiBoy13.
As in LOL.

Ha, ....... I don't know your first name. Dang it. >.< You won this round my friend.

This sounds... interesting. O.o

dancin_girl11 · 08-21-2009, 05:38 PM

austin ur powers going to be funny lol

cheychey33221 · 08-21-2009, 05:39 PM

hahaha u ot the name ideas from me hahaha... i still wanna be in it sis

dancin_girl11 · 08-21-2009, 05:41 PM

nope u said u didnt want to so HAHAHAHAHA

cheychey33221 · 08-21-2009, 05:42 PM

PWEASE!!!!!! please loving sister of mine

dancin_girl11 · 08-21-2009, 05:43 PM

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!

cheychey33221 · 08-21-2009, 05:44 PM

u can kill me in it... please i want to feel loved... u can vaporize me or something

08-21-2009, 06:36 PM

Originally Posted by CountryWiiBoy13

Ha, ....... I don't know your first name. Dang it. >.< You won this round my friend.

This sounds... interesting. O.o

...maybe hazard a guess at Ruairi?
Riku was equally misguided, do people not understand that Ruairi is actually my name?
Lookit!

Sorry, off topic, but name confusion always needs to be sorted ASAP.

08-21-2009, 05:14 PM	(#1 (permalink))
dancin_girl11 Shy Guy Shy Guy Join Date: Nov 2008 Status: Posts: 35 Tournaments Won: 0	" The Freaks" Chapter 1 I woke up in a pitch dark cave and i couldn't move my hands or feet. I didn't know what to do, all I knew was I HAD to get out of there. All of a sudden i heard two screams. " Wh-who's there?" " I... a... i'm Jordan." said a voice. " And i'm Dori. We are both 14." said the other voice. " Is that it?" Then a really creepy voice said " I'm Cory and this is my lil' bro Austin." " I'm 9 and my brother is 14. What's going on i'm really scared." " It's ok we are all going to be all right." then i used my telekinesis to get my knife out of my pocket and into my hand. I cut the ropes on everybody, got my flashlight and we walked down the cave. Then i heard footsteps. "Shhhh do u hear that?" i asked " No." Cory said. Then in a blink of an eye we were surrounded by these frog looking things. We all knew we were up to a fight.

08-21-2009, 05:39 PM	(#5 (permalink))
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08-21-2009, 05:20 PM	(#2 (permalink))
Ruairi Guest Status: Posts: n/a Tournaments Won:	Ha, Austin. As in CountryWiiBoy13. As in LOL. Anyway, more reading material is always good. Just make sure you stick at it, there's nothing worse than someone writing a story and posting it in installments, then getting bored and trailing off.

08-21-2009, 05:38 PM	(#4 (permalink))
dancin_girl11 Shy Guy Shy Guy Join Date: Nov 2008 Status: Posts: 35 Tournaments Won: 0	austin ur powers going to be funny lol

08-21-2009, 05:41 PM	(#6 (permalink))
dancin_girl11 Shy Guy Shy Guy Join Date: Nov 2008 Status: Posts: 35 Tournaments Won: 0	nope u said u didnt want to so HAHAHAHAHA

08-21-2009, 05:43 PM	(#8 (permalink))
dancin_girl11 Shy Guy Shy Guy Join Date: Nov 2008 Status: Posts: 35 Tournaments Won: 0	NO!!!!!!!!!!!!