Rate and cnc?

Eclipse · 02-19-2010, 05:35 PM

*Kr!sP* · 02-19-2010, 06:16 PM

It's actually really good, I'm no art critique but I think it's very artistic. I would like it a littl ebetter if it were a little brighter, but that's just me.

*Ruairi* · 02-19-2010, 07:30 PM

I would say that the text is a little dull, but it fits the style of the piece so it's definitely something that could critically be allowed to slide. Certainly the layering looks very clean and crisp, and it has a nice, rough, sandpaper kind of texture to it. I like.

Zerachial · 02-19-2010, 07:49 PM

It is very dull, needs to have more contrast to it. The sand paper texture is a little too much, perhaps leave it on the outside edges? I do however love your render and text choice.

Eclipse · 02-19-2010, 09:28 PM

ok thanks guys, i'll try undulling it without loosing my concept

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02-19-2010, 07:30 PM	(#3 (permalink))
Ruairi Hero of Something Join Date: Jan 2009 Status: Posts: 1,055 Tournaments Won: 0	I would say that the text is a little dull, but it fits the style of the piece so it's definitely something that could critically be allowed to slide. Certainly the layering looks very clean and crisp, and it has a nice, rough, sandpaper kind of texture to it. I like.

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Eclipse Goomba Goomba Join Date: Jul 2009 Status: Posts: 8 Tournaments Won: 0	ok thanks guys, i'll try undulling it without loosing my concept