I entered a poetry contest for the Midwest region. I have a little something made up but I need some opinions. Go ahead & be critical.
The dream key

I've looked everywhere on Earth
The Pacific to the Atlantic
South Pole to North Pole
East to West
Asking everyone in sight
Everybody said the same old thing
"I don't have it"
Then when I was about to give up
I realized something
I had the key
Only I had the key to my dreams
Noone else could have it
Noone else will ever have it
Only I could choose my dreams
I chose which dreams to live
I made my own dreams
Noone else could unlock them
Only I
Only I had the key

Well...

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