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Old 04-04-2008, 02:44 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by nhdog103 View Post
reat story, I'd give it an 8 out of 10. That was a great idea for making it around a wizard/medieval academy. I loved the storyline, and the suspense.

I can't wait to read chapter 2.

Mistakes.you mispelled the word the wrong. Thee is how you spelled it.
The mistake is somewhere in the story.
lol i fixed it on my USB so the thee has bin fixed, and it will beedited right now.

also i do not intend to right ove rthe week end, so chap 2 is up probably tuesday ( if I can't get the time in school/co-op i will bump it to wednsday)

also chap 3 wil be up friday or saturday!

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I love this story, espicially I had to spot one of your problems. :P
Oh well, you heard the rest ion MSN messenger. XD
rofl yea... MSN rofl.. :justno: (working on chap 2 right now while i have spare

GLAD YOU GUYS LIKED IT :blush:

edit: i jsut realized all my TAB are not in the text O.O
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