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Old 05-10-2008, 03:20 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I will give you guys more to read now (I'm currently working on chapter 30 (part 3 chapter 1)

here is a table of contents..I will add this on the first page

Part 1: the mushroom-egg war (12 chapters)
Part 2: The Path to Bowser
Part 3: The new king
Part 4: ??????? I'll get to part 4 someday...maybe even part 5 or 6

the main chracter in the beginning is yoshi but then both yoshi and bowser become main chracters starting in part 2 (myself; I love the bowser parts...lots of humor with him)

here is the next chapter

CHAPTER 1-10: Toad attack

Most of the enemy koopas, paratroopas and everyone else had already been destroyed, injured or they had run away like little crybaby chickens. It looked bad for the mushroom kingdom so they sent in their main officers and strongest battlers. The toads were sent to battle and finish it off!!!!! Apart from their normal awesome powers the toads also had super strength and teleportation using the power ups that they stole from yoshi.

Yoshi, orange yoshi and the goombas charged at the last and toughest remaining soldiers that the mushroom kingdom had in store. Everyone tried to use fire breath against the toads but the toads were too fast and kept teleporting out of the way. The toads were so fast that they easily punched and defeated many goombas without even using a drop of sweat. The goombas could not even see it coming; it was a mismatch for them, they were completely overpowered by the toads. Yoshi also tried
to tackle the toads but they were too strong and just blocked it or teleported swiftly and easily out of the way.

Finally, yoshi decided to eat all of the toads; with his tongue traveling at the speed of light, it worked; it was still hard to grab the toads because they were so speedy and sly but every once in a while he ate one of them. Yoshi sometimes had some bad luck and the toads grabbed his tongue; they spun yoshi around by his tongue and threw him as far as they could throw (really far). The pain was excruciatingly horrible but yoshi was determined to defeat the mushroom kingdom once and for all. After a long battle all of the toads were eventually captured inside of yoshis teleport proof eggs; Little did yoshi know that the battle with the toads was far from over.

Some of them broke free of the eggs; they seemed to be stronger when they came out of the eggs as if they absorbed powerful nutrients from inside of the eggs. To prevent the rest of the toads from popping out of their eggs yoshi ate the eggs and turned the eggs into eggs; he kept on doing this until there was about 12 eggs surrounding each of the toads. Nobody could break out of 12 eggs except maybe yoshi.

As for the toads that had already broken out of the eggs; these toads were the ones that left Yoshi to fight with the mushroom kingdom. The traitor’s were the strongest toads because they were trained by yoshi and orange yoshi. First, orange yoshi commanded the goombas to charge at the toads but they were too fast and quickly moved out of the way. Yoshi then tried to eat the toads but the toads just kept on popping out of the eggs.

Since there seemed to be no way to hit the toads, yoshi left orange yoshi in charge while he went flying back to his lab to come up with a solution to beat the toads. Yoshi quickly made it back to yoshi’s island and once again saw the ruins of yoshi village. Yoshi promised that he would keep his promise to avenge all of the yoshis. Yoshi worked long hours trying to come up with an idea to stop the toads; he worked all day until he finally found the solution. He hurried back to help his fellow troops defeat the toads and finally get his vengeance!

When yoshi made it back to the mushroom kingdom orange yoshi had retreated back to the mushroom mountains; he was unable to beat the toads by himself. Back at the castle, the toads were busy guarding the castle and Peach. When yoshi arrived at the mushroom mountains, he had a weird black egg in his hand; everyone was confused at why he had it but yoshi just told them to prepare the cannon. The goombas obeyed without question to their noble leader. Yoshi fired the cannon straight at the castle; at first nothing happened; it seemed like a defect to everyone but yoshi. But of course, the black egg was meant to do this; after a few minutes an eerie blackish purple gas began to excrete itself from the castle.

Yoshi explained that this gas harmed all fungi and the toads were defenseless because mushrooms were fungi. The toads were paralyzed by this gas so quickly that they did not even know what had happened to them. Yoshi and his troops quickly went to round up the last of the enemy toads and capture Princess Peach. Yoshi reached the castle and he trapped the remaining toads in 50 eggs each just to make sure that they did not escape. Yoshi started celebrating because he had won but little did he know that Princess Peach still had one last trick up her sleeve.


I told you guys the chapters will get longer (lol, super toads, super goombas, super yoshi)
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