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View Poll Results: What do you think of this story?
It's good! 12 46.15%
It sucks... 0 0%
Great dialouge! 10 38.46%
Bad choice of dialouge. 0 0%
Eh. 5 19.23%
Keep up the good work! 11 42.31%
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Old 09-28-2008, 07:51 PM   #41 (permalink)
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Old 09-28-2008, 08:28 PM   #42 (permalink)
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Nice. your good at this.
Thanks. So far I've been doing the whole story by myself. I'm TRYING to get help from some people though. =p As you can imagine, group projects usually suck so it's not going well. xp
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"I think you mean 'beating' a dead horse."
"Why would someone BEAT a dead horse?"
"Why would someone kill adead horse?"
"Maybe it kicked you when it was alive."
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Old 09-28-2008, 08:56 PM   #43 (permalink)
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make sure during the boss battle with porky Lucas says.

Now here's this giant enemy crab, hit it's weak points for massive damage.(yes i did steal that from MALR on youtube not my fault he thinks of everything first)
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Old 09-29-2008, 05:39 PM   #44 (permalink)
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i voted eh only cuz im canadian
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Old 09-29-2008, 06:03 PM   #45 (permalink)
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i voted eh only cuz im canadian
-_- I'm canadian too bad I don't say "eh". In this case, eh means I don't really care, not too bad, not too good.
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Old 09-29-2008, 06:20 PM   #46 (permalink)
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-_- I'm canadian too bad I don't say "eh". In this case, eh means I don't really care, not too bad, not too good.
no it was great i just say that option and i clicked it cuz i liked it:P so dont think you have "playa hatea"
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Old 09-29-2008, 07:42 PM   #47 (permalink)
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Exelent story isn't it
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Old 09-29-2008, 08:04 PM   #48 (permalink)
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that's a nice story
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Old 09-29-2008, 10:49 PM   #49 (permalink)
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(Pit) "When I was illegally.. I mean, legally watching the fight from my monitor I saw you get blown away and the collusium got enveloped by a purple sphere."
lol that part maid me laugh.
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Old 11-10-2008, 09:15 PM   #50 (permalink)
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I gotta stop this from being graveyarded. ;D Well, time to update. >.>

*The giant Porky statue exploded, and when the smoke cleared a spider-like robot with Porky inside appeared*

Porky: "It's time for you to go to sleep. That means I'm going to kill you by the way."

Lucas: "How did something that wide fit inside the statue?"

Ness: "Science! Now anyways, it's time to battle!"

*One of the claws from the spider-thingy shot out and struck Ness sending him back a few feet. Shortly afterward, another one shot towards Lucas*

Lucas: "Uhh..... uhh...... PK FREEZE!"

*A mist of ice came out of Lucas and froze the leg of the spider-dohicky before it hit him*

Ness: "Wait, Lucas, that gives me an idea!"

*The two claws in the front of the spider-thingamagig raised above it's head and shot a lazer at Ness which shot him back a few feet again*

Lucas: "That's you're idea?"

Ness: "No, this is!"

*Ness charges towards the spider-(insert word here)*

Ness: "PK CRO-"

*One of the claws starts slashing at Ness again and shoots him back again*

Ness: "You gotta be kidding me!"

Lucas: "Umm.... PK FREEZE!"

*Another one of the spider-thongadong's legs froze over*

Ness: "Hmmm.... I got it! PK THUNDER!"

Lucas: "You mean lightning? Thunder is only the sound lightning makes."

Ness: "No, shut up! PK THUNDER!"

*A small ball of thunder (electricity) shoots out of Ness and hits the two frozen legs, shattering them to pieces*

Porky: "Uh-oh, I better do something!"

*Small robotic Porky-bots shoot out of the spider-fribble and run towards Ness before detonating*

Ness: "OW! WHY ME?!?!?!?!"

Lucas: "I think I see a weakness here!"

*Lucas starts freezing all the spider-fogomogo's legs while it's busy shooting at Ness*

Ness: "That's IT! PK THUNDER!"

*The thunder ball flew towards Porky's spider-whipperdoodle's remaining legs and shattered them all*

Porky: "Uh-oh, better switch to arial."

*The spider-doodlemicheimer rose into the air and started shooting beams at Ness*

Ness: "WHY IS IT ALWAYS AIMING AT ME!?!?!?!?! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! PK CROSS!"

*A big green energy thing came out of Ness and went into the bottom of the spider-cluckadorthor. Than a large explosion went off inside it and blew open the cockpit hatch*

Porky: "Oh frickmuffins!"

Lucas and Ness: "PK CROSS/FREEZE!"

*Than the spider-hangomicbango went boom*
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