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kingjj · 03-29-2008, 09:33 PM

starting tomarow have to get off
chapter1-the beging king and the j- viruse
chapter2-king sets out to find the remaining survivors
chapter3- king meets drake.
chapter4part1-the gun shop shoot out! part 1
chapter4part2-the gun shop shoot out part 2
chapter5-runnn

chapter 1

the viruse spreeded through the town so fast. killing all the civilion. most of them are just zombies. umbrella created the viruse. they created it to make the millatry super human. i was one of the ones tested. my name is jack jenkins,most people call me king though. when i was young my dad was working on a medicne to heal me. i was about to die from a disease. he injected me with the early form of it. it made me healther super strong faster able to climb everything. i even could transform body parts,but if i used it to much i would die or lose control and turn to one of them. the zombies if u would say are vicouse but slow. they bite u and ur one of them in at least 2 hours depending one ur body type and ur health. thats why i am here, to stop umbrella. umbrella has screwd up stuff but they killed my dad and those zombies toook my girlfriend.

chapter 2

"all i have left is a 9mm with a couple bullets left, two magnums a sowrd some granads barley any food and the j viruses". said king. "ughhhhh....we no ur here. said a zombie". "fu

, they found me, looks like i got to kill some zombies now. said king." better not waste any bullets so got to slice and dice some heads.said king". "HERE I COME STUPID DEAD bitches! said king". slash, slash, shank,shank, ughhhh pfffft. "hahahahaa piece of cake". said king. "whats that i hear,gun fire?" must be more survivors then i expected. said king." shit here comes some more of them,time to ride in my stang. said king

kingjj · 03-30-2008, 05:19 PM

chapter 3

shit i am out of bullets said drake. ughhhhh.........said a zombie.
bang, two bullets went threw the zombies head. 10 pionts said king. who are you,ur not one of them are you? said drake. no i am just partly normal,who are you? said king. i am drake, i am with the spiecle civillion safe force. umbrella called us in to take out the zombies. said drake. my partners got bite and went crazy.........the only way to stop them was to kill them.said drake. i no i had a run in with some zombies to. here take this magnum. said king. we can get to a gun store and get some amo and stuff there. said king. right,but why are you here? said drake. Umbrella killed my dad for ejecting me when i was young with the j viruse but i was able to control it,and the zombies took my girlfriend.said king. i don't think umbrella knows i thinkthis place is being controled by a zombie leader,someone in unbrella with the viruses and is in full control like me. said king. Well king looks like are first mission together is to get to that gun shop. said drake

Chapter 4part1gun shop shoot out

drake looked at his wristband which connacted to his high tech armor. according to my map the gun shop is right over that ble bridge. said drake.
alright lets go then said king. run over to the bridge the both see the zombies.
all great how we gonna get across now said drake. its simple we shoot.said king. will contuine this chapter later

Chapter 4part2the mystery women

"eat lead" said king. king started shooting at the zombies vicousley. "just stop now there are to many of them".said drake. suddenly a streetbike came flying right past king and drake."looks like you guys need my help". said the msytery women. the women jumped off the bike and pulled some sub automatics and shot the bike makeing it explode nearly killing them all. "you two stand back.said the women". she killled all the zombies super fast."hey king she a friend of yours"?asked drake "no but she is like me it seems,it looked like she has been injected to with the viruse to". said king. "how did u know i was ejected to'?asked the girl. "becuase i can see u have powers like when u did that stuff fast".said king "yea i am ejected by the viruses,i can slow down time in my eyes sorta".said the women. "my name is agenda,i worked for umbrella one of ther ehigh secerity i got tested with the viruses giving me powers".saod agenda. king and the others wlaked into the gun shop to load up.
"just take the things u need".said drake king took magnum amo 9mm amo and some med kits. and he took a sub automatic gun just in case. drake took a gernade launcher an ak47 and a shotgun and some amo. agenda took a shotgun and some magnunems.
"ok lets go".said king and the walked out of the shop.
"so were do we go"?aaked drake.
as they were talking the phone started to ring.
king went over to pick it up.
"hello"?saidking
"i've been watching you,if u wanna get out alive u need to get to the umbrealla roof there is a chopter there,but to leave u got to get the cure from inside the lab,which is filled with them but then once u leave the real challenge starts".said the voice
"sounds easier then it is probly we accept".said king
king told the others and they treted there way to there next destination

chapter 5: RUUUUUUUUUUUUN!

As King and the others walked in the street of blood lost.
-Umbrella realy screwed it up this time.
-What u mean,Agenda?asked king
-A couple years ago umbrella had a massive infection like this one
-Oh wow i heard it was just a story
-No it was real

suddenly agenda started to get a headache
-SHIT my head!
-whats the matter? said drake
-Hes comming,.
-Who?asked king
-That.....
Suddenly a giant 4 leged creature came

-You two run.
suddenly drake started to run and fell into a hole
-Ahh shit no i am not dieing
out of no were a whole heard of zombies came and started to bite drake.
king ran over and helped him out but it was to late he was already turning into one of them
-nothing u can do to help me king
there has to be a way
-..........Kill me it will save u guys from me later
-OK.said kin gfiercly
king pulled out his katana and sliced his head off
-better take his wepions
king took his ak47 and his shotgun

king then ran over to kill the beast.
king used his powers and stretched to the top of him and stabed his head
-take that
-nice one king
agenda then pulled out her shotgun and blasted the beast in its eye
-bullseye
king and agend kept shoting
-we can't beat
-yes we can agenda
-We got to run
agenda ran off the other way to get away
-wait up!
king ran after agenda with the beast after him
king and agenda ran across the bridge
-i got it
king tooks the gernades and put them on the bridge and ran on the other side
as soon as the beast stepped on it the bridge classped from the explosion!

-thats for drake
-Drown u son of a bitch!
-agenda watch the laguange there is little zombies out

Kratos · 04-04-2008, 08:59 PM

awesome story man i hope King and Drake survives

. i even though its not over ill give two thumbs up so far.

kingjj · 04-04-2008, 09:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kratos

awesome story man i hope King and Drake survives

. i even though its not over ill give two thumbs up so far.

yea finally a veiwer who posted. well u got to see the rest

*nhdog103* · 04-05-2008, 01:09 AM

Great story so far King JJ. I'd give it a 6 and a half out of 10.

I like the storyline so far.

You need to spell check your story though. I hope that the ending will be the best and most suspensful part.

:P

*Agenda43* · 04-05-2008, 07:20 AM

the only thing i ebleive u need 2 know how to do, is DIALECT... you do not identify when your chracters talk. either with a "" or a -

kingjj · 04-05-2008, 09:23 AM

yea agenda this is my first story and i didn't no i had to do that.
btw part 2 is out and working on next chapter.
were king meets a girl whos name is agenda i no he is a boy but i am doing that cuase he made me mad for not lettting me shoot his pony in the leg

*nhdog103* · 04-05-2008, 10:47 PM

I like it a lot. Now that I have read that whole part I would give the stiry an 8 out of 10. He he, Agenda's in the story.

Zet3ga · 04-05-2008, 11:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kingjj

yea agenda this is my first story and i didn't no i had to do that.
btw part 2 is out and working on next chapter.
were king meets a girl whos name is agenda i no he is a boy but i am doing that cuase he made me mad for not lettting me shoot his pony in the leg

hahahahahahaha I just loled out of my chair ^_^, pony, oh well we got him later ^_^

9.5 out of 10

Cause of some spelling errors, but otherwise it is really good.

kingjj · 04-06-2008, 03:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zet3ga

hahahahahahaha I just loled out of my chair ^_^, pony, oh well we got him later ^_^

9.5 out of 10

Cause of some spelling errors, but otherwise it is really good.

yea i always do when i hear pony or robot leg. thats why i swistched the crystle with a pony leg. and spelling not my best but i trie

03-29-2008, 09:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
kingjj king of kings Piranha Plant Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 777	resident evil:the story starting tomarow have to get off chapter1-the beging king and the j- viruse chapter2-king sets out to find the remaining survivors chapter3- king meets drake. chapter4part1-the gun shop shoot out! part 1 chapter4part2-the gun shop shoot out part 2 chapter5-runnn chapter 1 the viruse spreeded through the town so fast. killing all the civilion. most of them are just zombies. umbrella created the viruse. they created it to make the millatry super human. i was one of the ones tested. my name is jack jenkins,most people call me king though. when i was young my dad was working on a medicne to heal me. i was about to die from a disease. he injected me with the early form of it. it made me healther super strong faster able to climb everything. i even could transform body parts,but if i used it to much i would die or lose control and turn to one of them. the zombies if u would say are vicouse but slow. they bite u and ur one of them in at least 2 hours depending one ur body type and ur health. thats why i am here, to stop umbrella. umbrella has screwd up stuff but they killed my dad and those zombies toook my girlfriend. chapter 2 "all i have left is a 9mm with a couple bullets left, two magnums a sowrd some granads barley any food and the j viruses". said king. "ughhhhh....we no ur here. said a zombie". "fu, they found me, looks like i got to kill some zombies now. said king." better not waste any bullets so got to slice and dice some heads.said king". "HERE I COME STUPID DEAD bitches! said king". slash, slash, shank,shank, ughhhh pfffft. "hahahahaa piece of cake". said king. "whats that i hear,gun fire?" must be more survivors then i expected. said king." shit here comes some more of them,time to ride in my stang. said king __________________ if you like video games and are good at them click here Last edited by kingjj; 04-18-2008 at 12:46 PM.

03-30-2008, 05:19 PM	#2 (permalink)
kingjj king of kings Piranha Plant Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 777	chapter 3 shit i am out of bullets said drake. ughhhhh.........said a zombie. bang, two bullets went threw the zombies head. 10 pionts said king. who are you,ur not one of them are you? said drake. no i am just partly normal,who are you? said king. i am drake, i am with the spiecle civillion safe force. umbrella called us in to take out the zombies. said drake. my partners got bite and went crazy.........the only way to stop them was to kill them.said drake. i no i had a run in with some zombies to. here take this magnum. said king. we can get to a gun store and get some amo and stuff there. said king. right,but why are you here? said drake. Umbrella killed my dad for ejecting me when i was young with the j viruse but i was able to control it,and the zombies took my girlfriend.said king. i don't think umbrella knows i thinkthis place is being controled by a zombie leader,someone in unbrella with the viruses and is in full control like me. said king. Well king looks like are first mission together is to get to that gun shop. said drake Chapter 4part1gun shop shoot out drake looked at his wristband which connacted to his high tech armor. according to my map the gun shop is right over that ble bridge. said drake. alright lets go then said king. run over to the bridge the both see the zombies. all great how we gonna get across now said drake. its simple we shoot.said king. will contuine this chapter later Chapter 4part2the mystery women "eat lead" said king. king started shooting at the zombies vicousley. "just stop now there are to many of them".said drake. suddenly a streetbike came flying right past king and drake."looks like you guys need my help". said the msytery women. the women jumped off the bike and pulled some sub automatics and shot the bike makeing it explode nearly killing them all. "you two stand back.said the women". she killled all the zombies super fast."hey king she a friend of yours"?asked drake "no but she is like me it seems,it looked like she has been injected to with the viruse to". said king. "how did u know i was ejected to'?asked the girl. "becuase i can see u have powers like when u did that stuff fast".said king "yea i am ejected by the viruses,i can slow down time in my eyes sorta".said the women. "my name is agenda,i worked for umbrella one of ther ehigh secerity i got tested with the viruses giving me powers".saod agenda. king and the others wlaked into the gun shop to load up. "just take the things u need".said drake king took magnum amo 9mm amo and some med kits. and he took a sub automatic gun just in case. drake took a gernade launcher an ak47 and a shotgun and some amo. agenda took a shotgun and some magnunems. "ok lets go".said king and the walked out of the shop. "so were do we go"?aaked drake. as they were talking the phone started to ring. king went over to pick it up. "hello"?saidking "i've been watching you,if u wanna get out alive u need to get to the umbrealla roof there is a chopter there,but to leave u got to get the cure from inside the lab,which is filled with them but then once u leave the real challenge starts".said the voice "sounds easier then it is probly we accept".said king king told the others and they treted there way to there next destination chapter 5: RUUUUUUUUUUUUN! As King and the others walked in the street of blood lost. -Umbrella realy screwed it up this time. -What u mean,Agenda?asked king -A couple years ago umbrella had a massive infection like this one -Oh wow i heard it was just a story -No it was real suddenly agenda started to get a headache -SHIT my head! -whats the matter? said drake -Hes comming,. -Who?asked king -That..... Suddenly a giant 4 leged creature came -You two run. suddenly drake started to run and fell into a hole -Ahh shit no i am not dieing out of no were a whole heard of zombies came and started to bite drake. king ran over and helped him out but it was to late he was already turning into one of them -nothing u can do to help me king there has to be a way -..........Kill me it will save u guys from me later -OK.said kin gfiercly king pulled out his katana and sliced his head off -better take his wepions king took his ak47 and his shotgun king then ran over to kill the beast. king used his powers and stretched to the top of him and stabed his head -take that -nice one king agenda then pulled out her shotgun and blasted the beast in its eye -bullseye king and agend kept shoting -we can't beat -yes we can agenda -We got to run agenda ran off the other way to get away -wait up! king ran after agenda with the beast after him king and agenda ran across the bridge -i got it king tooks the gernades and put them on the bridge and ran on the other side as soon as the beast stepped on it the bridge classped from the explosion! -thats for drake -Drown u son of a bitch! -agenda watch the laguange there is little zombies out __________________ if you like video games and are good at them click here Last edited by kingjj; 04-18-2008 at 12:46 PM.

04-04-2008, 08:59 PM	#3 (permalink)
Kratos Goomba Goomba Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 4	hmm awesome story man i hope King and Drake survives . i even though its not over ill give two thumbs up so far.

04-05-2008, 01:09 AM	#5 (permalink)
nhdog103 Don't Mess With Puff News Team Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 1,050 My Mood:	Great story so far Great story so far King JJ. I'd give it a 6 and a half out of 10. I like the storyline so far. You need to spell check your story though. I hope that the ending will be the best and most suspensful part.:P __________________ DON"T MESS WITH THE PUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!

04-05-2008, 07:20 AM	#6 (permalink)
Agenda43 i am all better now Blitzkrieg Abteilunge Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 2,144 My Mood:	the only thing i ebleive u need 2 know how to do, is DIALECT... you do not identify when your chracters talk. either with a "" or a - __________________ If you were here in 07, then put this in this sig, because your a Veteran of WiiUsers!

04-05-2008, 09:23 AM	#7 (permalink)
kingjj king of kings Piranha Plant Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 777	yea agenda this is my first story and i didn't no i had to do that. btw part 2 is out and working on next chapter. were king meets a girl whos name is agenda i no he is a boy but i am doing that cuase he made me mad for not lettting me shoot his pony in the leg __________________ if you like video games and are good at them click here

04-05-2008, 10:47 PM	#8 (permalink)
nhdog103 Don't Mess With Puff News Team Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 1,050 My Mood:	I like it I like it a lot. Now that I have read that whole part I would give the stiry an 8 out of 10. He he, Agenda's in the story. __________________ DON"T MESS WITH THE PUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!

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