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-Hello i am prof.Oken,a pokemon expert in Mist village. I am a friend of ur dad(prof.Rollwen from shinno.) He told me to let u pick 1 of 3 pokemon he sent over on your thirtenth brithday,which is today.

THE STORY BEGINS

Jack woke up early in the morning cause he knew it was his birthday.

-Only 7:00am? Moms probly awake better get dressed and go eat.
Jack ran down stairs to find his mom reading a letter from his dad and getting pancakes ready.

-Mom whats that?
-Its a letter from u dad, it says that he can't make it but he sent you and your cusint Mike'sgift down to prof.Oken to give to you.
-I hope its a pokemon,then i can set out on my adventure!
-Not so fast,u just can't leave u got to do u chorse and then pack ur bags and leave.
-Whatever mom.

king hurryed up and ate his pankes and left to go down to his cusints to tell him about his pokemon.
-Hi uncle Frank
-Hi Jack
-Dere is Mike i got to give him his present from my dad.
-Oh ya that reminds me here is ur present.

Uncle frank hands Jack his present
-Open it.
Jack quickly opens the present to find alot of stuff.
-Its 6 pokeballs and a map of the zone region.
-Thanks Uncle frank!
-No problem Jack
-Well i need to go tell make about his present
Jack ran up stairs to find mike playing ssb:b on his wii.
-Hey Mike
-Sup John
-My dad got u a present
-Its down at Prof. Oken's place
-Ok i'll be down there in a while to get it

And away Jack left to go down prof.Oken's place to get his pokemon

-Oh Jack i was expecting you to come.
-Yea i was expecting you to say that to me.
-Oh well ur dad sent down three pokemon.
-THREE!
-Yes three but one is for you and your cusint.
-Who gets the last?
-Any one in the town who comes down to get it does.
-Oh....ok so what pokemon are they?
-iI bet its probly something good like Charizard,or Ho-Oh,or machamp!
-No not right he sent down these three pokemon: Eevee,Crogunk,and Makuhita.
-WHAT! man those one stink!
-No they are realy good for a starting trainer.

No who will Jack pick? read chapter two to find out which one he choses

CHAPTER2:I chose you

As Jack was going to pick his pokemon,a random explosion happened outside
-What was that?
-i don't know prof. but we have to check it out
Jack and Prof.Oken tan outside to see the fishing game on fire.
-What who did this?
-I don't know Jack
Prof.Oken grbed two pokeballs from his pocket.
-Go Azmurile and Crocnaw!
-Az
-Naw
-Use water gun to put it out
The Pokemon quickly put out the fire
-Now lets quickly return to my lab
As Jack and Oken walked back to the lab a mysteriouse stranger ran out of the lab
-Theif stop! yelled Prof. Oken
Jack and Prof. ran in side the lab to see one of the pokemon were missing
-He took Makuhita. Prof.
-I see well know u have to pick Eevee or Crogunk?
-I chose u Eevee
-Nice choice
Out of no were Mike ran in to get his pokemon
-So only one left?
-Well i'll take it!
-Well cus.....WANNA BATTLE!
-ok
and away they started to battle

-Eevee,tackle!
-crogunk doge and use mud slap!
-now Crogunk astonish!
its a direct hit
-Tackel attack Eevee!
its a direct hit
-Crogunk use astonish!
-Dodge and do tail whip!
-Eevee finish him off with a tackel!
-Here is your winner Jack and Eevee

-Oh yea boys here take this a pokedex
-Thanks,but what is it?
-see u scan a pokemon with it and it gives you data, sorta like an dictionary of pokemon.
Oh cool thanks.
-Hey Jack?
-Yea Mike?
-Can i go on an adventure with you?
-Yea sure!
And away they went on ther eadventure but....
-Jack! Get ur but over here!
-Yea Mom?
-You should of told me u were leaving with ur cusint
-Oh yea sory i forgot to tell you.
-Well here i got you these
-A map of the Zone region and a pager phone so i can check up on u and Prof.Oken and ur friends u make
-*Tear* thanks Mom i am gonna miss you
-Jack lets go already.
-Bye mom and away Jack ran with mike onto route 1

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fan art goes here and pics of characters and maps
NOTE:i did not make sprites fround them on the web
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quick map of hidden mist village:
i did not make sprites fround them on the web and the girl is the theft and the boy whose house is across from jack's(dude with Eevee) is his cusint mike
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route 1
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the town thats up north from route 1 aka New Hive town

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lol those do stink give me a Ho-oh lol ^_^

hmmm... I would probably pick Croagunk or Eevee

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yea lol if i did let him get a ho oh i would make it actauly just transform into a ho ho(the food). but i know which one i am letting him pick

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lol =P plus it might be a little to easy if you start off with a legendary ^_^

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dude? u should make this same setting into an RPG and me z3tga and youa re the 3 people?? just a thought ^^

and continue this one asa story, ebcause its a nice read =)

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LOL Cissnei, that was the ULTIMATE comment

Yea i was thinking about it
and chapter 2 is up

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Nice, keep up the writing!

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