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Old 05-08-2008, 10:02 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Old 05-09-2008, 09:32 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Old 05-10-2008, 03:20 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I will give you guys more to read now (I'm currently working on chapter 30 (part 3 chapter 1)

here is a table of contents..I will add this on the first page

Part 1: the mushroom-egg war (12 chapters)
Part 2: The Path to Bowser
Part 3: The new king
Part 4: ??????? I'll get to part 4 someday...maybe even part 5 or 6

the main chracter in the beginning is yoshi but then both yoshi and bowser become main chracters starting in part 2 (myself; I love the bowser parts...lots of humor with him)

here is the next chapter

CHAPTER 1-10: Toad attack

Most of the enemy koopas, paratroopas and everyone else had already been destroyed, injured or they had run away like little crybaby chickens. It looked bad for the mushroom kingdom so they sent in their main officers and strongest battlers. The toads were sent to battle and finish it off!!!!! Apart from their normal awesome powers the toads also had super strength and teleportation using the power ups that they stole from yoshi.

Yoshi, orange yoshi and the goombas charged at the last and toughest remaining soldiers that the mushroom kingdom had in store. Everyone tried to use fire breath against the toads but the toads were too fast and kept teleporting out of the way. The toads were so fast that they easily punched and defeated many goombas without even using a drop of sweat. The goombas could not even see it coming; it was a mismatch for them, they were completely overpowered by the toads. Yoshi also tried
to tackle the toads but they were too strong and just blocked it or teleported swiftly and easily out of the way.

Finally, yoshi decided to eat all of the toads; with his tongue traveling at the speed of light, it worked; it was still hard to grab the toads because they were so speedy and sly but every once in a while he ate one of them. Yoshi sometimes had some bad luck and the toads grabbed his tongue; they spun yoshi around by his tongue and threw him as far as they could throw (really far). The pain was excruciatingly horrible but yoshi was determined to defeat the mushroom kingdom once and for all. After a long battle all of the toads were eventually captured inside of yoshis teleport proof eggs; Little did yoshi know that the battle with the toads was far from over.

Some of them broke free of the eggs; they seemed to be stronger when they came out of the eggs as if they absorbed powerful nutrients from inside of the eggs. To prevent the rest of the toads from popping out of their eggs yoshi ate the eggs and turned the eggs into eggs; he kept on doing this until there was about 12 eggs surrounding each of the toads. Nobody could break out of 12 eggs except maybe yoshi.

As for the toads that had already broken out of the eggs; these toads were the ones that left Yoshi to fight with the mushroom kingdom. The traitor’s were the strongest toads because they were trained by yoshi and orange yoshi. First, orange yoshi commanded the goombas to charge at the toads but they were too fast and quickly moved out of the way. Yoshi then tried to eat the toads but the toads just kept on popping out of the eggs.

Since there seemed to be no way to hit the toads, yoshi left orange yoshi in charge while he went flying back to his lab to come up with a solution to beat the toads. Yoshi quickly made it back to yoshi’s island and once again saw the ruins of yoshi village. Yoshi promised that he would keep his promise to avenge all of the yoshis. Yoshi worked long hours trying to come up with an idea to stop the toads; he worked all day until he finally found the solution. He hurried back to help his fellow troops defeat the toads and finally get his vengeance!

When yoshi made it back to the mushroom kingdom orange yoshi had retreated back to the mushroom mountains; he was unable to beat the toads by himself. Back at the castle, the toads were busy guarding the castle and Peach. When yoshi arrived at the mushroom mountains, he had a weird black egg in his hand; everyone was confused at why he had it but yoshi just told them to prepare the cannon. The goombas obeyed without question to their noble leader. Yoshi fired the cannon straight at the castle; at first nothing happened; it seemed like a defect to everyone but yoshi. But of course, the black egg was meant to do this; after a few minutes an eerie blackish purple gas began to excrete itself from the castle.

Yoshi explained that this gas harmed all fungi and the toads were defenseless because mushrooms were fungi. The toads were paralyzed by this gas so quickly that they did not even know what had happened to them. Yoshi and his troops quickly went to round up the last of the enemy toads and capture Princess Peach. Yoshi reached the castle and he trapped the remaining toads in 50 eggs each just to make sure that they did not escape. Yoshi started celebrating because he had won but little did he know that Princess Peach still had one last trick up her sleeve.


I told you guys the chapters will get longer (lol, super toads, super goombas, super yoshi)
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Old 05-10-2008, 09:43 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Great chapter!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next one!!! You thought of everything!!
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Great chapter!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next one!!! You thought of everything!!
thank you
I'm so happy:cry:
I might post the next chaoter now, or maybe I shall make you wait until tomorrow.

I'm actually going through and editing some chapters from when I wrote it the first time, I realized that when I first wrote it (it was the same storyline) it was kind of choppy (I started editing a couple chapters ago)
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new chapter!

CHAPTER 1-11: Last Resort

The mushroom kingdom had lost almost all of their troops and were about to be defeated but Princess peach had one last secret plan in store for Yoshi. This weapon was never supposed to be used by anyone, ever; but Peach didn’t care and used it anyway. From underneath the castle, Princess peach released an army of 50 mad and hungry chain chomps. The chain chomps totally wiped out everything in their path; even their own allies. All of the goombas quickly disappeared from the face of the planet; this was obviously bad news for yoshi. Luckily, yoshi quickly thought of a plan to stop the chain chomps; the two yoshi’s started breathing fire on the chain chomps and they began to turn red. The chain chomps were so hot that they jumped into the vast ocean and quickly sank to their deaths.

“That was easier than I thought. Now nothing can stop us!”

It was too bad for the Goombas and yoshi that the beginning of Peach’s last resort was just barely beginning. After yoshi thought that he already won the war; from out of nowhere a giant chain chomp as big as Princess Peach’s castle popped out of the ground. The few remaining goombas had no chance against this giant creature of the underworld and they were easily crushed and destroyed. Not even yoshis fire breath worked on this ginormous chain chomp. It looked like it might be over for Yoshi but from one of the eggs yoshi threw, an ULTRA STAR popped out!

Yoshi ate the ultra star and turned 5 times bigger than his normal size. Yoshi grew almost invincible but even with these ultra powers the battle was not easy. The chain chomp charged at yoshi and yoshi amazingly dodged it at the last second. Yoshi tried eating the chain chomp but he was still too big and heavy. Once again the chain chomp charged at Yoshi; this time yoshi got hit and was sent flying over the mushroom mountains. Yoshi quickly got back up before the chain chomp could finish him off with one more hit. Yoshi tried breathing fire to destroy the chain chomp but this just made him madder and because of it, it started charging and attacking faster and more wildly. Yoshi was once again hit but this time he stayed up in the air because he was not going to defeat the chain chomp on land.

Yoshi flew around the chain chomp at extreme speeds until the chain chomp was dizzy and confused. While the chain chomp was dizzy yoshi flew in on him and grabbed him by the end of his chain. Using all his strength, yoshi flew him up into the air and started spinning him around. Yoshi flew at light speeds all the way into outer space; from out there, he spun the chain chomp one more time and threw him rocketing back down into the planet. The chain chomp blasted through the atmosphere and hit Earth at the speed of 8,000,000 miles per hour. The speed of the chain chomp blasting through the atmosphere was so intense that only a small piece of him the size of a beach ball hit the ground. Almost the entirety of the chain chomp was melted, vaporized, or disintegrated while it was traveling through the atmosphere. Even though only a small part of the chain chomp hit the ground, it still left a crater the size of Yoshis Island on the ground.
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Great chapter, yet again!!!! Keep up the great work! I love this story!!!
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oops..sorry about the wait (forgot about it)...here's the next chapter

enjoy (short chapter)


CHAPTER 1-12: King Yoshi

The battle was short and smooth after the chain chomps and the giant chain chomp were defeated. Yoshi lost his Ultra star power soon after battle but because of it he became victorious over the mushroom kingdom. The defeated kingdom had nothing left, they could not fight anymore. All of the remaining mushroom troops ran for their lives as Yoshi captured Princess Peach. Peach put up no final fight as she was captured in fear of being killed by yoshi. That night yoshi threw a victory party, everyone attended it and watched yoshi as toadsworth was forced to give him the crown and the throne. Even Peach, Mario and Luigi (after being revived by 1-up mushrooms) were tied down and forced to watch the new ruler become king

Yoshi became the king of not just the mushroom kingdom but of the entire world (including Yoshis Island, mushroom kingdom and some other places) He ruled with an iron fist and nobody objected him. Mario and Luigi were thrown in the dungeon and princess peach was trapped in a cage. Yoshi decided to spare all of the toads trapped in the eggs and all of the enemy troops that were still alive injured or in eggs. Yoshi lived happily in Yoshi’s castle with the toads from that day forward. But there was soon to be one crucial event that would put yoshi in the greatest battle of his life…


there is about 5 short chapters in a row now......after that the chapters are longer than ever
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thanks for forgiving me

I need to get my focus back into writing
I haven't written a new chapter in weeks:justno:

I will start writing now!!!!
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