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Old 11-02-2007, 07:31 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Story: "The Devil's Creation"


The story is about a woman called "Sidney White", and how she suffers from a demonic child,
this is not like the story "Omen"! its completely different,
hope you enjoy the horror:

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Read Online: Click Here
Microsoft Word Document: Click Here
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the "Read Online" link takes you to a bunch of random garble :/
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Old 11-02-2007, 02:47 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Yea and srry but im not downloading it, ill read it online, but it wont let me
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oh well, atleast my friends liked it, and it got posted on my school's magazine and pinned on the english class boards, so im satesfied
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There are numerous run-on sentences, grammatical and punctuational errors within your story. It requires more attention to editing. But, regardless of all that shnaz, it is a fairly and potentially interesting read.
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I don't like to download random files from the internet unless I know for certain they're virus checked...and I wish I could read it online too >.< Can't you just copy/paste it from a Word document?
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There are numerous run-on sentences, grammatical and punctuational errors within your story. It requires more attention to editing. But, regardless of all that shnaz, it is a fairly and potentially interesting read.
I know thats why i let my english teacher edit it n post it, but he said it was inspired by omen, hello ppl its just a devilish boy! i sware i didnt steal the idea, and its not a virus too!, and i cant paste it coz it takes too much space
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