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6 out of 10
Is this all your story?
If it's not then I will give it an 8 out of 10. Gut if this is it I can only give it an 8 out of 10. I Mr. Lyons though, he sounds kinda like that dude in 20,000 Leauges Under the Sea.
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2: Barsher
Mr. Calder Barsher was retired. He had managed HOA’s for ten years. He started when he was twenty-nine years old when he started his career. He ended it when he was thirty-nine years old. He had over three million dollars in his bank account. He had just recently moved into a small house. He lived in Astoria, Oregon. He had the perfect view of the Columbia River. The green bridge stretched for five mile over the river. The Pig N’ Pancake right across the street from the Holiday Inn. His house was on top of a hill. Astoria was the greatest place on earth. He had loved it. He had grown up in Chicago. He never really like it there. It was to much commotion: Cars were always honking their horns. He had never really saw the stars before. There was to much light pollution. Every other day, there was a murder in an alley, not even ten blocks from his house. The only real reason he did not care for Chicago was because of that one day. He was walking back home from the school bus stop. He had chosen to take a shortcut. A gang had met him in the alley he cut through. “Boy, what you doin’?” asked a black man. He was wearing a kerchief around his head. “I am just trying to get home, mister.” Barsher explained. He was scared of these men. “Stay out of the way boy, or else you could be in serious trouble.” Another man said, revealing a revolver from behind his jacket. Barsher ran out the way he came… Mr. Barsher woke up. His eyes were fuzzed with sleep. He could not help but feel to go back to sleep. But, he got up. He took his morning shower. He put on his clothes. Today was special. Today was a golf tournament. It was to be held at Glendoveer Golf Course in Portland. It was an hour drive. He could make it a forty minute drive. His polo shirt and Dockers were perfect for today. He looked over at his window. There was a soft tapping on the window. It was coming from a drizzle of rain. He smiled. He loved these days. It was a good day for Astoria. He stood up after a breakfast of toast and fried eggs. He picked up a key ring. It had ten keys on it. He walked to a closet and reached for his golf clubs. He put them into the trunk of his Dodge Caliber. He opened the drivers door and put the keys into the ignition. He twisted the keys and pulled his seatbelt on. He shoved the gas pedal downward. He back out of his driveway going over fifty miles and hour. He drifted for a moment, then stopped. He headed down the hills of Astoria. He took a turn left. He kept to this road for forty minutes. Mr. Barsher lifted his driver out of view and took a soft whack at the small Callaway golf ball. It sailed three-hundred yards. It landed in the sand trap. He was not scoring very good today. The score was three over par. By the end of the day, he had left with a score of five over. Not very good. Barsher washed his face and went to bed. Barsher did not like the idea of having his doors locked at night. In addition, he had a security system. The only real reason why he was rich, was because he had invented a security system. You did not have to lock the doors, there were no codes.( except for one) Just a scanner. It was a retinal scanner. In order to allow people in the house with out having to knock or anything, It just had to scan there eyes. If the eyes matched any of the eye “fingerprints”, then the person would be able to get in. If not. The computer would send a very small, but effective, alkali metal tube down a chute just large enough to allow the metal to fall down into a doggy bowl.. a grenade that did not look like a grenade, but water. Yes, he had a doggy bowl outside. The water would quietly stream into the bowl from the bottom, and then, have a small tube of an alkali metal added to it from the chute. It would blow up, either sending the people off the porch, or scare them. Then the computer would contact the police. If he needed to add another persons eye fingerprint, he would simply enter a code in from his computer, and bring out a scanner that was able to be used in a USB drive. They would scan their eyes and it would be fed to the hard drive. The rest was simple. He felt safe in the house. The only eye fingerprints he had on them were his landlord’s, and some of his family. He felt perfectly safe. The landlord put his eye to the scanner. He turned the knob, and then he felt a sharp pain. “Bring him too.” said a person, as the landlord fell to the ground. They picked him up. Then They pulled a ring out of a small cylinder, and rolled it into Barsher’s house. The house was soon filled with knockout gas. They put on the gas masks and pulled him out of his room. They were gone within fifteen minutes. I found a way to continue the story!
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