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Dark Kirby · 02:05 AM

I just decided to make a story of the plot of the Subspace Emissary. The reason is, the game has no dialouge, so my story is basically made to show the dialouge of what they are saying. Most of the time the dialouge will be serious, like the game, but I might add some funny lines here and there. I WILL update this occasionally!

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(Announcer) "Welcome to the Smash Stadium, where combatants fight for glory, fame, and honor! Now, to reveal the combatants!"

(Zelda) "Look!"

(Peach) "It's Mario!"

*Mario trophy lands on the arena and instantly becomes real*

(Mario) "Lets-a-go!"

(Zelda) "Look over there!"

*Kirby trophy lands on the oppisite side of the arena, also becoming real immediatly.*

(Kirby) "Hi everyone! Hello!" *Turns to Mario* "Oh, snap!"

*A long battle than occurs with Kirby being the victor*

(Kirby) "La-la-la, POKE!"

*Mario turns back to normal*

*As the crowd cheers, suddenly a strange dark cloud appeares over the arena and the Halberd is seen. An opening appears in the bottom and releases purple gas particles*

(Mario) "What the?"

*Suddenly, the purple gas hits the ground and starts spawning greenish creatures*

*Zelda and Peach run down to aid Mario and Kirby in the battle*

*After defeating several monsters, a cloaked figure appears with only yellow eyes showing*

(???) "Greetings. I am R... I mean... The Ancient Misister!"

(Kirby) "Hi. I'm Kirby, and this is Mario, and this is..."

(A.M.) "Silence! I'm not here to make conversation! I'm here to do my duty! Minions!"

*Suddenly, the ball the Ancient Misister was holding dropped to the ground. Two robots latched onto the ball and opened it up revealing a bomb*

(Kirby) "Oh, snap!"

(A.M.) "Now for a parting gift..."

*All of the sudden Mario gets hit by a cannon ball and goes flying away. Kirby turns to see Zelda and Peach in iron cages... being held by Petey Pirahna!*

(Kirby) "Oh, snap!"

*Petey Pirahna starts swinging the cages around at Kirby while Kirby is continuously dodging them*

(Zelda) "Help me Kirby!"

(Peach) "No, help me!"

*Kirby was thinking. It was hard to decide what to do. He was being attacked, a bomb was about to explode, and he had to choose who to save*

(Zelda) "I'll give you a cookie!"

*Kirby all of the sudden jumps into the air and knocks Zelda's cage out of Petey Pirahna's hand. The cage then hits it in the head and knocks it out. Then it exlodes. All of the sudden a fat guy wearing a blue shirt and yellow hat apeared with a gun and shot at Peach. As Peach is crawling out of her cage, a black and yellow arrow shot out from the gun and hit her, turning her into a trophy. He then jumped over to her and grabbed her. He then jumped away*

(Zelda) "We have to go help her!"

*As they run towards Peach, Kirby looks to the side and sees the bomb at 5 seconds*

(Kirby) "Oh, snap! Warpstar! Help meeeeeee!" "... and Zelda too I guess."

*As they flew away, the bomb exploded creating a purple and black sphere around the entire area*

(Kirby) "...So where's my cookie?"

* * *

(Pit) "Yeah, fight fight fight! Huh?"

*On the screen that Pit is watching, all of the sudden a giant purple and black sphere appears*

(Pit) "Oh no! I need to aid them!"

(???) "Pit... you must go help..."

*Pit runs over and bows down to his goddess*

(Pit) "Can you give me my bow so I may help them?"

(???) "M,kay"

*A bow appears and Pit takes it. He then falls out of the main doors of the temple and flies through the clouds. Suddenly, he sees the Halberd flying in the distance and it releases purple gas, creating greenish monsters.*

(Pit) "What the?"

*He then breaks his bow into 2 swords and fights them off. After they are all gone, he notices Mario in the clouds. He them turns him back to normal*

(Mario) "What happened?"

(Pit) "When I was illegally.. I mean, legally watching the fight from my monitor I saw you get blown away and the collusium got enveloped by a purple sphere."

[chemical.kirby] · 05-12-2008, 08:28 PM

nice!
but you leave out the party where mario gets his butt kicked? xD

Dark Kirby · 05-12-2008, 08:32 PM

It's not easy to write out a whole battle. You know how it starts and how it finishes, and that's the best I can do.

[chemical.kirby] · 05-12-2008, 08:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dark Kirby

It's not easy to write out a whole battle. You know how it starts and how it finishes, and that's the best I can do.

lol,i was jk
but good job!

Dark Kirby · 05-12-2008, 08:36 PM

I already have a few later parts planned out. Like Mr. Game and Watch will talk in that strange comuter talk for some reason.
(Ex: Lolz. L33t. ! 1!k3 th4t *Which means "I like that"*)

[chemical.kirby] · 05-12-2008, 08:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dark Kirby

I already have a few later parts planned out. Like Mr. Game and Watch will talk in that strange comuter talk for some reason.
(Ex: Lolz. L33t. ! 1!k3 th4t *Which means "I like that"*)

fun!

Dark Kirby · 09:03 PM

I love Kirby's favorite line. "Oh, snap!"

Edit: Oh and by the way, if anyone has any ideas for characters, tell me and I might implement them into the story.

Dark Phoenix · 05-12-2008, 09:09 PM

man i laught in a lot of parts nice kirby continue writing this.. n__n

Dark Kirby · 05-12-2008, 09:12 PM

I'll continue when I remember what happens next, but I can't go on the Wii for a few days. Can anyone tell me what happens next? I forgot...

Dark Phoenix · 05-12-2008, 10:18 PM

i cant use wii too.... i think donkey kong is next

View Poll Results: What do you think of this story?
It's good!	7	63.64%
It sucks...	1	9.09%
Great dialouge!	5	45.45%
Bad choice of dialouge.	0	0%
Eh.	1	9.09%
Keep up the good work!	3	27.27%
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