Story: "The Devil's Creation" - The Global Nintendo Wi-Fi Community

magic246 · 11-02-2007, 06:31 AM

The story is about a woman called "Sidney White", and how she suffers from a demonic child,
this is not like the story "Omen"! its completely different,
hope you enjoy the horror

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Download:
Story Cover (Image): Click Here
Read Online: Click Here
Microsoft Word Document: Click Here

Myth · 11-02-2007, 01:09 PM

the "Read Online" link takes you to a bunch of random garble :/

*Ichigo* · 11-02-2007, 01:47 PM

Yea and srry but im not downloading it, ill read it online, but it wont let me

magic246 · 11-02-2007, 02:18 PM

oh well, atleast my friends liked it, and it got posted on my school's magazine and pinned on the english class boards, so im satesfied

AriseParachute · 11-02-2007, 04:18 PM

There are numerous run-on sentences, grammatical and punctuational errors within your story. It requires more attention to editing. But, regardless of all that shnaz, it is a fairly and potentially interesting read.

Myth · 11-02-2007, 04:52 PM

I don't like to download random files from the internet unless I know for certain they're virus checked...and I wish I could read it online too >.< Can't you just copy/paste it from a Word document?

magic246 · 11-04-2007, 10:49 AM

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Originally Posted by AriseParachute

There are numerous run-on sentences, grammatical and punctuational errors within your story. It requires more attention to editing. But, regardless of all that shnaz, it is a fairly and potentially interesting read.

I know thats why i let my english teacher edit it n post it, but he said it was inspired by omen, hello ppl its just a devilish boy! i sware i didnt steal the idea, and its not a virus too!, and i cant paste it coz it takes too much space

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