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Sonic and the Black Knight SBK
Sonic and the Black Knight SBK
Published by Jojo.Nintendo
07-29-2008
Sonic and the Black Knight SBK
Coming out in 2009
My rating for the Game is a 5 stars


Welcome members of WiiUsers today I'm going to inform you guys about the release of a hopefully awesome game this year. All the information I'm giving you guys cannot be found on Google or any were else. My information comes from the well known Nintendo magazine ever and its called Nintendo Power.




Our hero Begins his quest as a mere knave. Only by becoming a full-fledged knight will have any hope of defeating King Arthur.
(Plus, Sir Sonic has nice ring to it.) Since the finger-wagging hedgehog isn't exactly know for a Sword type of person well his Sword, a talking Blade named Calibur, serves as a partner to Sonic to help him in his quest.

The Game is an RPG game with amazing graphics and a new twist. Sonic can acquire everything from Gauntlets to magical tomes to new Swords. There's up to 200 items to collect in the Game and if you have difficulty finding some of the items you can go online and trade some items with friends.
 
By Kite on 07-29-2008, 02:03 PM
good job on your first article jojo! I'd recommend downloading firefox. It helps with spelling errors, thats what i do anyway. Hope to see more!
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By Twilighter on 07-29-2008, 02:03 PM
ok ummm... dude no offense don't take this wrong or anything.But first off this article has already been done.SEcond off, oyu need to work on your grammar and spelling. Third off, you should think about putting the pictures of the article towards the middle or end.
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By Jojo.Nintendo on 07-29-2008, 02:07 PM
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ok ummm... dude no offense don't take this wrong or anything.But first off this article has already been done.SEcond off, oyu need to work on your grammar and spelling. Third off, you should think about putting the pictures of the article towards the middle or end.
ok thnks and no it wasn't been down and yes I will try to correct most of my grammer.

its a new Game not Sonic Unleshed this is a new one
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By Chef Tragic on 07-29-2008, 02:14 PM
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ok ummm... dude no offense don't take this wrong or anything.But first off this article has already been done.SEcond off, oyu need to work on your grammar and spelling. Third off, you should think about putting the pictures of the article towards the middle or end.
That all depends. He should put the pictures where they look good, and where they are relevant. If he put a picture of Yoshi where the topic was Mario, it wouldn't look good, now would it? Yes, if possible, he should put the pictures toward the middle or end, so it doesn't make the homepage look cluttered. But the relevancy matters, too. Also, I agree with Marluxia, please use a spell check of some sort.
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By Bluestrat on 07-29-2008, 02:15 PM
Very good for your first article, Jojo.
Like others have said, you do need to work on Spelling and Grammar.
Also, your article is very opinionated. Articles don't need to be opinionated and should be unbiased.

"Welcome members of wiiusers today im going to talk to you guys about the Relese of the most awsom game of the Year. All the information im giving you guys cannot be found on google or any were else. My information comes from the best Nintendo magasine ever ever its called Nintendo Power."

Also, none of that. Don't use words/phrases like "Most Awesome" or "Best" unless it's a fact; like it's a fact that CoD4 got voted 'Best Game of 2007'.
Last edited by Bluestrat; 07-29-2008 at 02:18 PM.
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By Jojo.Nintendo on 07-29-2008, 02:15 PM
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That all depends. He should put the pictures where they look good, and where they are relevant. If he put a picture of Yoshi where the topic was Mario, it wouldn't look good, now would it? Yes, if possible, he should put the pictures toward the middle or end, so it doesn't make the homepage look cluttered. But the relevancy matters, too. Also, I agree with Marluxia, please use a spell check of some sort.
yes im downloding a programme right now ok thnks
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By Chef Tragic on 07-29-2008, 02:16 PM
Adding to my last comment: In this case, the pictures could have been farther down in the article.
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By Jojo.Nintendo on 07-29-2008, 02:17 PM
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Very good for your first article, Jojo.
Like others have said, you do need to work on Spelling and Grammar.
Also, your article is very opinionated. Articles don't need to be opinionated and should be unbiased.
yeah thnks for the tip I will try my best ok
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By ToxicPickle on 07-29-2008, 02:18 PM
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ok ummm... dude no offense don't take this wrong or anything.But first off this article has already been done.SEcond off, oyu need to work on your grammar and spelling. Third off, you should think about putting the pictures of the article towards the middle or end.
Dude, it's his first article and he has a little trouble with spelling. Lay off of him.

Although, you do need to check dates and check your grammar.
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